![]() I think your draft follows MLA guidelines and it is free from mechanical problems. The conclusion restates the thesis and main points. However it seems to be difficult to know whether your thesis takes a firm stand on the statement, "Between…gender role." Therefore your thesis may need to clearly show an arguable position about the statement. The thesis is bookended correctly with the label and in the first paragraph. There is the information to identify the author and assignment in the left corner but you fail to write date there. You may need to omit indent at the start of paragraph. Your draft seems to be completed but it has the problem of basic formatting rules. There are 655 words which are less than the minimum required of this assignment, so you had better add more sentences. Your review draft is readable and addresses the topic for this assignment. These are really powerful evidence to support your assertion. And I think it is strong point of your draft to quote the articles. I wasn’t really surprise with this article because I follow golf and I hear all the comments the commentators say during the golf tournaments about Michelle Wie especially in the last couple tournaments because her game has been off and she hasn’t done or won too much tournaments lately. This article also shows how women can do the same thing as a man but not get the same praise as in the case of Michelle Wei. This article shows how women are still being put in a gender role and how women shouldn’t be doing something because of their gender. People were saying that she shouldn’t have tried and that she should have stuck to playing in the LPGA along with the rest of the women in golf. This kind of achievement deserved praise but instead it got criticized. What she accomplished according to the article was something no women have ever done before. She was trying to make the cut along with the rest of the men and she fell shy just five shots away from making the tournament. The article talked about how Wei was playing golf on the PGA tour which consists of all men. An example of this is the article on Michelle Wei. Three New Orleans men were arrested this week on suspicion of possessing child pornography, the Louisiana Attorney General's Office said Friday.Joseph Dwight Jr., 33 Dan Clinton Pittman, 39 and. The more you do so, says Chapman, the more you will be prepared for marriage.Another indication that gender role still exist and that women still are not getting the same respect as men is the fact women still are being looked down upon for trying to do something that society say can only be done by men. Grapple with the practical tips and ideas discussed, honestly share your thoughts and feelings, respect each other's opinions, and find workable solutions to your differences. NOBTS released a statement saying the seminary had provided 'complete cooperation' to law. Andrew Shiira was being held at the Orleans Parish Prison on 10 counts of pornography involving juveniles. But don't just listen to it-experience it. NEW ORLEANS (BP) - A student at New Orleans Baptist Theological Seminary (NOBTS) was arrested today (May 13) on child pornography charges. Things I Wish I'd Known Before We Got Married was written to help you realize your goal of marital happiness. If you're engaged, even recently married, it will help you examine your relationship foundation and learn the skills necessary for building a successful marriage. Whether you're single or dating, this audio can be your relationship blueprint and help you decide if and when you're ready to tie the knot. Among the twelve things you should know: that being in love is not enough to make a successful marriage, that romantic love has two stages (and how to make the transition), that mutual sexual fulfillment is not automatic, and that personality profoundly affects behavior. The stakes on marriage are high, but the rewards of preparing are even higher. In Things I Wish I'd Known Before We Got Married, he shares what he and these couples have learned from experience. Gary Chapman, #1 New York Times best-selling author of The 5 Love Languages™, has spent the last thirty-five years counseling couples. Before you plan your wedding, plan your marriage! Wish you could know what you're getting into when you say "I do"? Now, with Things I Wish I'd Known Before We Got Married, you can.
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